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    Pansy
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    Let Every Man Admire The Poet

    For the beauty of the words come from within, written without
    Painting a picture of colorful phrases, that is something unique no doubt
    If only however did everyone see
    How all the artistic phrases
    And all their beauty had effected me
    Had anyone known the trueness of words
    Flowing from the heart, and placed with delicate care
    Could anyone ever see the beauty that it is to me



    Outward at the time of dusk
    I saw the woman standing in the mist
    I ran t'ward the mist
    t'ward the mist I ran at the time of dusk
    Nowhere did I find the woman however
    The woman standing in the mist
    Outward at the time of dusk

    Screaming was I in the mist
    Screaming at the time of dusk
    Searching, and dreadfully looking
    Was I trying to find the meaning
    Nowhere did I find the meaning however
    So Screaming was I in the mist
    Screaming at the time of dusk

    Lost was I in the mist
    Lost at the time of dusk
    Lost and treking through the mist
    Treking, trying to find the woman
    Who stood in the mist at the time of dusk
    However lost was I in the mist
    Lost at the time of dusk

    Standing was the woman in the mist
    Standing was the woman at the time of dusk
    Standing she had in her hand a flame
    Sparkling, and warming was the flame
    Keeping us together the flame was
    However she still stood standing in the mist
    Standing was the woman at the time of dusk

    Dying was the flame in the mist
    Dying was the flame at the time of dusk
    Slowly then did my heats beating go
    Slowly the beating fell to halt
    Until I fell dead from the halt of the beating
    As the flame then died in the mist
    Dead was the flame at the time of dusk



    A voice was heard echoing
    Echoing across the caverns
    In the caverns did I follow
    Follow the voice echoing
    Echoing across the caverns
    Silently did my footsteps beckon
    Beckoning as I followed the voice
    Echoing across the caverns
    Slowly I reached my hand
    Reaching my hand t'ward the voice
    Echoing across the caverns
    Tightly did I grasp the voice
    But nothing was what I felt
    When grasped for the voice
    Echoing across the caverns
    Always did I search but never did I find
    Never did I find the voice
    Echoing across the caverns

  2. ISO #2
    mrzwach
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    Re: Let Every Man Admire The Poet

    it would work better if you didn't rhyme words with themselves.

    it just disrupts the flow of it all

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    Pansy
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    Re: Let Every Man Admire The Poet

    You're supposed to write random poetry here

 

 

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