s-fm The arsonists dream

[Hypersniper]

Spoiler : Epic Rp :

Oily city is at peace for once but what the public of this city don't know is that there never at peace.
The street lights flicker and the silence and the darkness overwhelms the city but a flicker of fire appears and it grows and it roars through the streets,the city knew nothing of this. When the day dawned a row of houses,shops,hospitals lay as only dust.
"ALL PEOPLE OF OILY CITY RETURN TO THE CENTER OF THE CITY" Hypersniper shouted
"As your new mayor i have brought out the famous gallows of the city to kill and rid of this manic who has disturbed are peace"
People whispered and muttered of the happenings when "But mayor the gallows haven't been used in years we cant kill" shouted a citizen of the OIL
"Well seems as your objecting YOU,OFFICER GET HERE put this man on the gallows" Hyper shouted "Do you have any last words"
"Ii am the last Member of the great Giovanni mob, the men who used to run this city but as soon as I am struck dead A old Veteran of the great Mob will rise and all of you will never know who such man is but you only mayor will know who such a man is but if you tell one soul you will be struck dead"
The trapdoor fell down the last member of the mob fell dead but at what cost did it take.....

• Hidden town
• Hidden town
• Hidden town
• Hidden town
• Hidden town
• Hidden town
• Hidden town
  
• Sadist
  
• Mob Boss

Officer/Medic/Red Light/Citizen/Sniper/Detective/BodyBag/Journalist/Veteran/Blacksmith
badge/first aid kit/Dildo/wallet/rifle/magnifying glass/bodybag/pen/machine gun/mallet
MobBoss owns revolver/sadist owns poison

Spoiler : Role Cards :

• Town Officer Search the house of one person, discovering one of their items
• Town Medic Heals 1 person a night saving them from 1 attack
• Red Light Citizen Visits 1 person and provides then with a "red night special" blocking them
• Citizen Able to vote
• Town Sniper You can kill people at night takes 1 night to reload gun goes through protection (two uses)
• The Detective Follows 1 person to find out who he/she visited and who visited him/her
• Town BodyBag follows 1 person if attacks uses there life in place for his
• The JournalistCan choose 1 player each night to interview them(get report) the journalist may reply there report will be given to the town the next day
  The Veteran Can Take some bud at night becoming paranoid and shoot all the bitches at your door
  Can go on alert at night, killing anyone who goes there (two uses)
  Blacksmith Can give a gun or vest to someone at night
• Mob Boss The great Giovanni Mob Boss
  1: Intimidation-Intimidate a player at night blocking their night action
  2: Revolver-Shoot a night killing a player (only one can be used)
  Passive Abilities
  1: Immunity-is immune to any Guns and poison
• Sadist A Sociopathic Sadist wanting all dead
  1: Sadistic torture-Choose a player at night and poison them unless healed they die next day
  2: Terroism-plant a bomb in a house can blow up anytime they want blowing up all the bombs killing all them bitiches (only one can be used) (bypasses vest and immunity but not doctor)
  Passive abilities
  1: is immune to Death by gun

Spoiler : Winning Conditions :

• Town wins if Mob Boss and Sadist are killed
• Mob Boss wins if last ones remaining
• Sadist wins if last one remaining

Spoiler : Rules :

• Do not edit posts
• Do not speak of the FM outside of this forum
• vote using [vote] player name [/vote ] system (without spaces) and [ unvote] unvote [/unvote]
• all questions in green text
• no quoting pms
• no videos or images

Spoiler : Ties :

• Town loses all ties
• mafia wins tie with town
• Sadist wins ties with all

Spoiler : Feedback :

• Officer You found [insert item] telling you they are town/mob/sadist
  
• Spy Your target visited X! player(or no player)
• Your target was visited by X! player(or no player)
  
• Sniper You have been shot by the Sniper
  
• Doctor heal You was attacked but a doctor healed you back to health
• You was Explodinated But a doctor diffused the bomb and saved your life
• You was dying of Dettol but you were pumped back into help
  
• Bodybag You jumped into the bullet taking the hit for them
• You jumped into the Explosion
• You offered to DETTOL
  
• Red Light Special You was distracted of what you was doing but got the red light special
• (Note this is the same for consort ability)
  
• Blacksmith
• you were given a gun/vest
  
• Journalist You have received a request for a report

[*]Mob Boss you have been gunned to death by Giovanni
[*]Sadist you have been Blown up[*] You were at a house party before it went...BOOM[*]You have been fored to drink DETTOL you will die if it pumped with the next 24 hours

1. Days will be instant
2. All night actions are posted in the day due to being in the uk
3. Day start with no lynch
4. Last wills allowed
5. Death notes for Mafia and burner

• Roleblocks
• Spy watches/stalks
• Cop check
• Guns/vests given
• Body bag gets in place
• Sadist Plants bomb
• Sadist Explodes
• Sadist poisons
• Mafia kills
• Vig shoots/gun used
• Vest Used
• Doc heals
• Spy gets feedback
• journalist report received

[Hypersniper]

This was the first s-fm I tried to create en I first joined but by have edited it by lower ing the size of the game and changing some other minor things

Yo wtf u posting on this site bro

[Orpz]

Are you still interested in hosting this game? If you are, I am requiring pretty much a complete new draft of the formatting and grammar.

[Hypersniper]

Yea I will I also want to change quite a bit, can probs get it done by end of tomorrow

[Hypersniper]

finished

[Orpz]

Clarify more on Town Officer's ability. What items does he search for? It seems like the only items present in the role cards are guns or armors.

Is the Town Sniper supposed to be a nerfed sheriff? All of the bad guys are immune to gun fire, so he will not be able to kill any of them.

I am not sure if this is intended but neither scum can kill each other.

The scums have more than one active ability. Can they use both in one night?

Blacksmith is missing from the order of operations.

Please be more professional in the original post.
"The Veteran Can Take some bud at night becoming paranoid and shoot all the bitches at your door" is funny, but does not clarify to any potentially new players what the veteran actually does.

You also have some minor inconsistencies related to the names of your scums. For instance, you refer to the Sadist as Burner elsewhere in the setup. Make sure you address these as well in your revision.

[Hypersniper]

Clarify more on Town Officer's ability. What items does he search for? It seems like the only items present in the role cards are guns or armors.
The items are just the ability weapon eg. sniper owns a rifle,mob boss owns revolver etc

Is the Town Sniper supposed to be a nerfed sheriff? All of the bad guys are immune to gun fire, so he will not be able to kill any of them.
changed so 2 shots with night inbetween and goes through armor

I am not sure if this is intended but neither scum can kill each other.
made it so Sadist can kill mob boss
The scums have more than one active ability. Can they use both in one night?
no

Blacksmith is missing from the order of operations.
added

Please be more professional in the original post.
"The Veteran Can Take some bud at night becoming paranoid and shoot all the bitches at your door" is funny, but does not clarify to any potentially new players what the veteran actually does.
added more professional approach

You also have some minor inconsistencies related to the names of your scums. For instance, you refer to the Sadist as Burner elsewhere in the setup. Make sure you address these as well in your revision.
have done

answered

[Orpz]

In that case you will need to clearly state which roles carry which items

[Hypersniper]

In that case you will need to clearly state which roles carry which items

will do

[Hypersniper]

Officer/Medic/Red Light/Citizen/Sniper/Detective/BodyBag/Journalist/Veteran/Blacksmith

badge/first aid kit/Dildo/wallet/rifle/magnifying glass/bodybag/pen/machine gun/mallet

Mob boss owns revolver and sadist owns poison

[Orpz]

Put that in the original post.

[Hypersniper]

done

[Orpz]

Town Officer seems incredibly overpowered. He is essentially able to discern a player's exact role. I cannot approve this setup while the role exists in its current state.

What is the purpose of Veteran if he can only kill Town players?

You need to think about the balance of your game more carefully. Consider the power that Town currently carries with its array of power roles, and consider the disorganization that Scum must suffer through because they are neutral killers. It is not impossible to balance, as I have hosted a similar setup in "S-FM Do You Even Lift?", so I expect that you can figure out what is best for your game and revise as you see fit.

Once I feel it is balanced, I can approve the setup for signups.