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    Hello. I've been busy, as of lately, reading and writing in English for my own enjoyment. And it crossed my mind that I'd share some excerpts every now and then, because why not? Warning, it's pretty awful. Seeing how I'm an ESL, it's actually pretty grating. I need to apologize, first and foremost to any native speakers for butchering your language. Well, with that out of the way. Here it is:

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    "The young governess had been in Mr. Jacque’s employ for eight-and-twenty days. The advancement of a sum of eight hundred pounds to her had not only come as a surprise but had also rocked the solid foundation of civility society claimed to rely on. As for the devil himself, who was rather plump but neat around the waist, there was much to be said. He was the type of man who was in the habit of abusing his rank, and had secured himself a sinecure by some inscrutable means that the reader’s sensibilities shall not be insulted by providing such a baffling account of his conspiracies. This much should be acknowledged. He would be tried in no court of law known to man. As man’s pockets were bottomless pits. And Mr. Jacque provided where there were none.

    Hereafter, the reader shall no longer be kept in the dark. As it stands, Charlotte, the lady in question, had been bribed in that melancholy day, by the shameless Mr. J. &c. By all accounts, including that of his fellow conspirators, she was his inferior and deserved not a pence. But knowing what she did, turned the tables in her favor. It was far too dangerous to keep her around, yet even moreso to get rid of her. Something had to be done, which brings us to the present day. Mr. J. was sitting alone in the drawing-room, pondering on a small golden pocket-bible he had secured from an auction. Having been crossed one too many times by his lesser turned him into a very cautious man, when around them.
    The very thought of her consumed him even during his undisturbed studies. She was very much aware of the fact that the property which had only been left in his care did not belong to him as he claimed. As did a very considerable fortune he had come to abuse."

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    Re: Darkcrusader's personal writing corner.

    Mr. J.? Hmm... some people just want to watch the world burn, right?

    I'm a fellow ESL plebeian, but I would say this is not bad at all ^^
    And I am always glad people undertake creative endeavors for the sake of it! That is usually interesting, and always good for fostering beauty (and even critical thinking, who knows). Good luck with this project!
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    it looks like many, e.g. MM and lag, suffered under the influence of paopan. However there is a victim: frinckles. He left the path of rationality and fully dived into the parallel reality of baby shark, king shark, and soviet union pizzas.
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