I decided to write a pom

**Zane** · December 21st, 2011, 08:41 AM

Hi guys,
I am nice,
Who are you?
Are you nice, too?
I hope you like this pom,
Even if your name is not tom.
What do you think should I continue writing,
And what are your feelings when you read this pom?
Anyways I like playing football, playing with snow and kiting,
What about you, do you like sports or do you play computer games with your cd-rom?

PS: If too many people don't like this pom, I will stop writing poms.

**jaczac** · December 21st, 2011, 09:03 AM

Me gusta poms

**wolfcheese** · December 21st, 2011, 09:16 AM

I'm probably the only one that keeps reading the title as "I decided to write a porn".

**jaczac** · December 21st, 2011, 09:22 AM

D:
Living up to your sig?

**Ubernox** · December 21st, 2011, 09:26 AM

Well spotted.

Your Pom, Zane. It. I like.

**CmG** · December 21st, 2011, 10:01 AM

oww i read "i decided to write porn" IMA DISSAPOINT

**BorkBot** · December 21st, 2011, 10:02 AM

Do you really want to read a porn about fluffy animals and Winnie the Pooh?

Right, I didn't think so

**Dust** · December 21st, 2011, 10:04 AM

I love this.

**BorkBot** · December 21st, 2011, 10:11 AM

As a professional pom reviewer, I have to be critical.

I strongly suggest you change the first line from "Hello guys" to "Hey guys"

That way, every new line has more syllables and takes up a larger horizontal space than the line that precedes it. Which was the artistic intent behind this creation, I believe.

Sookie · December 21st, 2011, 10:20 AM

Originally Posted by wolfcheese

I'm probably the only one that keeps reading the title as "I decided to write a porn".

i also read it as this at first lol

**Zane** · December 21st, 2011, 10:21 AM

hey is too long, but yes I changed it to hi

**BorkBot** · December 21st, 2011, 10:22 AM

Excellent!

**Lazers** · December 21st, 2011, 10:39 AM

ITS SHIT

jk it is gr8 u must whrite more...p oeam

**NorthStar** · December 21st, 2011, 01:44 PM

This is something I thought Plato would get to before Zane did...

**Ash** · December 21st, 2011, 01:46 PM

im ash, i am not nice, i like this pom, i think u should continue writing, my feelings dont change, im emo. i do sports, its called pokemon battles, and i also like to play with my computer's cd-rom.

@Northstar - plato has made poems on the forums before.

**Goremancer** · December 21st, 2011, 02:41 PM

Only a day later did I realize it was pom not porn. So I thought it was hilarious how ppl were talking about how great it is to write porn

**Admiral** · December 21st, 2011, 04:11 PM

bitches ain't shit
but hoes and tricks

mrzwach · December 21st, 2011, 06:17 PM

hahaha this is so funny

lol XD XD

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