"Behind Those Hills"

[Espozito]

So, I've been working on it for one and a half years and am finishing it right now.
"Behind Those Hills" is my first huge drawing project (while there are also Mafia Pictures and The Titan Wizards). It's a comic book in fantasy style. I use my imagination and original myths with some changes and improvements to make a sort of interesting story.
The comic book is originally in Russian so it takes time for me (not very long) to tranlaste it and put the english text in the pages. That's why I won't be able to upload all the pages at once. It will be updated.

Just to mention: the first pages are just... bad, cause I hadn't such drawing skills as I got now, so after the first 10 pages things are gonna be better and better!

Episode 1:

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I hope you'll like this.


Episode 2:

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[louiswill]

Then making a friend out of him.....

That sword is special right?

[Espozito]

Then making a friend out of him.....

That sword is special right?

yep.

[Espozito]

So, the first 10 pages are now translated. From page 9 I was using new chainmail technique and had shadows improvements.
What is your opinion about the story, about the drawing style. What should I improve and work on harder?

[Damus_Graves]

Not bad.
For a First works it is well done so far.
There is not much to critic about for the first ten pages, which is just introduction, setups, and preludes.

[Espozito]

Not bad.
For a First works it is well done so far.
There is not much to critic about for the first ten pages, which is just introduction, setups, and preludes.

Thank you. Well, I gtg to college and will continue translating when I'm back. For now I made page 11 also. Well, I think this is the beginning of improved pages, so I hope you'll like it.

[Espozito]

Updated up to page 15 with (I hope) improved drawing skill.

EDIT: 16.

[Espozito]

Alright, I have translated all the pages I've drawn yet and uploaded them here. There is only one page remaining - the last one.
But still, what do you think about the story and about the art itself? I really want to know your opinions.

[Espozito]

Totally worthless, but bump.

[Espozito]

Holy Cthulhu, Baron Samedi, Ganesh, Kali, Loki, Odin, Satan, Jensen Ackles... and someone else... OFC! Christ!
I have finally ended the first episode. I would be grateful if you commented about it. It's really important for me.

[Espozito]

Made the cover finally. Now I officialy have a finished first episode of my comic book! Yay!

[Espozito]

So, it's been a while and now I started working on episode 2. Here's the first page.

[powerofdeath]

Hmm it seemed really interesting story, I would like you to continue this

[Lazers]

Bretty good

Keep practicing anatomy and you'll be golden

[Espozito]

Hello everyone again. It's been a while ago. So, the story continues!