but who am i gonna preconstruct feedback to?[/QUOTE]
[B][COLOR="#FFFFFF"]Preconstructed feedback is a dedicated section on the setup that specifically states all feedback that can be received. For example, please look at the following feedback section from MattZed's [URL="https://www.sc2mafia.com/forum/showthread.php/32565-S-FM-Mafia-Wars"]Mafia Wars[/URL][/COLOR][/B]
[spoiler=Possible Feedback, sorted by associated role:]
No Feedback:
[quote][color="#FFFFFF"]No Feedback.[/color][/quote]
[COLOR="#00FF00"]FBI Agent[/COLOR]/[COLOR="#00FF00"]Mole[/COLOR]:
[quote][color="#FFFFFF"]You recruited XXX as a mole. Their role is now [COLOR="#00FF00"]xxx[/COLOR].[/color][/quote]
[quote][color="#FFFFFF"]You failed to recruit a mole.[/color][/quote]
[quote][color="#FFFFFF"]You have become a mole.
[quote][center][color="#00FF00"]Mole[/color]
You retain any powers you previously had.
You share a factional [COLOR="#FFFFFF"]arrest[/COLOR] (night kill) with the [COLOR="#00FF00"]FBI Agent[/COLOR].
You cannot arrest anyone if you were recruited the previous night.
You cannot perform any other night actions if you perform the factional arrest.
You share a night chat with the [COLOR="#00FF00"]FBI Agent[/COLOR]. (Link)
You also have an anonymous night chat with the [COLOR="#FFA500"]Lucianos[/COLOR]. (Link)[/center][/quote][/color][/quote]
[COLOR="#FFA500"]Lucianos[/COLOR]:
[quote][color="#FFFFFF"]You have chosen [COLOR="#FFA500"]xxx[/COLOR] as your secondary role.[/color][/quote]
[COLOR="#FF0000"]Beg[/COLOR][COLOR="#FFA500"]uiler[/COLOR]:
[quote][color="#FFFFFF"]You have X hidings left.[/color][/quote]
[COLOR="#FF0000"]Jan[/COLOR][COLOR="#FFA500"]itor[/COLOR]:
[quote][color="#FFFFFF"]You have sanitized XXX. Their role and alignment was [color="#FF0000"]x[/color][color="#FFA500"]x[/color][color="#00FF00"]x[/color].
Their last will was:[/color]
[quote]-insert last will here-[/quote]
[color="#FFFFFF"]You may sanitize X more times.[/color][/quote]
[quote][color="#FFFFFF"]You have sanitized XXX. Their role and alignment was [color="#FF0000"]x[/color][color="#FFA500"]x[/color][color="#00FF00"]x[/color].
They left no last will.
You may sanitize X more times.[/color][/quote]
[COLOR="#FF0000"]Tai[/COLOR][COLOR="#FFA500"]lor[/COLOR]:
[quote][color="#FFFFFF"]You have X tailorings remaining.[/color][/quote]
[COLOR="#FF0000"]Under[/COLOR][COLOR="#FFA500"]boss[/COLOR]:
[quote][color="#FFFFFF"]Your target's role is xxx.[/color][/quote]
[COLOR="#FF0000"]Godf[/color][color="#FFA500"]ather[/COLOR]:
[quote][color="#FFFFFF"]You have revealed yourself as the Godfather![/color][/quote]
[COLOR="#FF0000"]Kidn[/COLOR][COLOR="#FFA500"]apper[/COLOR]:
[quote][color="#FFFFFF"]You have kidnapped XXX. For tonight, you have a night chat with them. (Link)[/color][/quote]
[quote][color="#FFFFFF"]You have been kidnapped! For tonight, you have a night chat with your kidnapper. (Link)[/color][/quote]
[quote][color="#FFFFFF"]You have executed your kidnapped victim. You may not execute again.[/color][/quote]
[COLOR="#FF0000"]Ag[/COLOR][COLOR="#FFA500"]ent[/COLOR]:
[quote][color="#FFFFFF"]Your target visited or was visited by the following people:[/color][/quote][/spoiler]
[B][COLOR="#FFFFFF"]All possible feedback that can be received is put into a spoiler, with all feedback being sorted by what role they are associated with. Creating one of these feedback sections will make it impossible for players to mechanically confirm themselves based on the feedback they receive, reduce the possibility of host error, and make it clear what roles produce feedback.[/COLOR][/B]
Originally Posted by Hybrid
but who am i gonna preconstruct feedback to?
Preconstructed feedback is a dedicated section on the setup that specifically states all feedback that can be received. For example, please look at the following feedback section from MattZed's Mafia Wars
Spoiler : Possible Feedback, sorted by associated role: :
No Feedback:
No Feedback.
FBI Agent/Mole:
You recruited XXX as a mole. Their role is now xxx.
You failed to recruit a mole.
You have become a mole.
Mole
You retain any powers you previously had.
You share a factional arrest (night kill) with the FBI Agent.
You cannot arrest anyone if you were recruited the previous night.
You cannot perform any other night actions if you perform the factional arrest.
You share a night chat with the FBI Agent. (Link)
You also have an anonymous night chat with the Lucianos. (Link)
Lucianos:
You have chosen xxx as your secondary role.
Beguiler:
You have X hidings left.
Janitor:
You have sanitized XXX. Their role and alignment was xxx.
Their last will was:
-insert last will here-
You may sanitize X more times.
You have sanitized XXX. Their role and alignment was xxx.
They left no last will.
You may sanitize X more times.
Tailor:
You have X tailorings remaining.
Underboss:
Your target's role is xxx.
Godfather:
You have revealed yourself as the Godfather!
Kidnapper:
You have kidnapped XXX. For tonight, you have a night chat with them. (Link)
You have been kidnapped! For tonight, you have a night chat with your kidnapper. (Link)
You have executed your kidnapped victim. You may not execute again.
Agent:
Your target visited or was visited by the following people:
All possible feedback that can be received is put into a spoiler, with all feedback being sorted by what role they are associated with. Creating one of these feedback sections will make it impossible for players to mechanically confirm themselves based on the feedback they receive, reduce the possibility of host error, and make it clear what roles produce feedback.
[B][COLOR="#FFFFFF"]More Questions, for simplicity sake, please address these one paragraph/line at a time, it'll make the review process much easier.
Does the nurse heal all attacks inflicted upon the target or just one?
The Orphan Kid and Teacher mechanic seems unnecessary, and almost unworkable, I suggest it is scrapped. The orphan kid being a lookout/detective combination, while the teacher being a psuedo-architect should be fine.
The Teacher's ability is stated as a night action, however, it's impossible to create a chat during the same phase the action is submitted. I suggest edits to the role card are made to specifically state that it is a day action, which creates the chat during the night.
If the Police targets someone that is attacked by the vigilante or Ghost Hunter, do both the Police and the other TPR die?
Does the orphan kid know exactly whom visited his target and whom his target visited? Is the information mixed up some how?
The Order of Operations must be changed in order to reflect changes made on other roles.
[COLOR="#00FFFF"]Format Concern: There is no feedback section, I strongly recommend you preconstruct feedback in order to reduce the amount of confusion for the players and reduce chance of host error.[/COLOR]
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Be sure to put this game up on the queue if you are interested in hosting! As a first time host, I will guarantee you will have a signups up as soon as possible once you are on the queue.
More Questions, for simplicity sake, please address these one paragraph/line at a time, it'll make the review process much easier.
Does the nurse heal all attacks inflicted upon the target or just one?
The Orphan Kid and Teacher mechanic seems unnecessary, and almost unworkable, I suggest it is scrapped. The orphan kid being a lookout/detective combination, while the teacher being a psuedo-architect should be fine.
The Teacher's ability is stated as a night action, however, it's impossible to create a chat during the same phase the action is submitted. I suggest edits to the role card are made to specifically state that it is a day action, which creates the chat during the night.
If the Police targets someone that is attacked by the vigilante or Ghost Hunter, do both the Police and the other TPR die?
Does the orphan kid know exactly whom visited his target and whom his target visited? Is the information mixed up some how?
The Order of Operations must be changed in order to reflect changes made on other roles.
Format Concern: There is no feedback section, I strongly recommend you preconstruct feedback in order to reduce the amount of confusion for the players and reduce chance of host error.
Be sure to put this game up on the queue if you are interested in hosting! As a first time host, I will guarantee you will have a signups up as soon as possible once you are on the queue.
Originally Posted by Hybrid
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